Caps vs Bucket hats

This term we have been looking at persuasive writing. We had three subjects to choose from palm oil, why family should spend more time together and why we should be able to wear caps. I chose the caps to write about. This is my persuasive writing. First we had to write an introduction which was one paragraph long then we are to write a body for a persuasive writing and that had to be 3 or 4 Paragraphs long and then we're at the conclusion which was one paragraph long. Hope you enjoy my writing!

Why Toroa students should be able to wear caps instead of bucket hats.

Do you ever get Frustrated telling children to put their hats on In term 1 and term 4? I think seniors should be able to wear caps instead of bucket hats. They are adjustable, Caps are better for running They don't fly off and we think they look cooler.

I think it's better that we can adjust our hats to be tight on our heads. Bucket hats can’t be adjusted so you can't make it tight on your head. Adjustable caps won't lead to children making up excuses to teachers about why their hats are not on.

Are you  worried that we may get sunburnt? You don’t need to worry, Toroa students  are older and more capable and responsible. You can trust the students to apply sunscreen to their face and neck being sun safe!

Kids make up excuses about why they are not wearing their hats because they are playing tag or manhunt and it keeps flying off. If they have caps they will not take them off because they don’t fall off when you are running. It will be amazing for you tom  not have to keep tell kids to put their hats back on! 

   I think seniors should be able to wear caps instead of bucket hats. They are adjustable, Caps are better for running, we think they look cooler. If we had caps, you would look forward to term 1 and term 4. How are you feeling about the upcoming summer terms? 

Do you think we should be able to wear caps?