Dear diary
As i hop into my plane to learn how to fly this plane. Making sure my seatbelt is fasent. Taking off from the ground. “Wosh” as I take off in my plane. I breeze through to air and my hair flying across my face. Sticking my head out of the top of the plane pretending I am a dog. Flying around the world in my plane. But I am sad because I am too tall for this plane. I am so tall i have never see the inside of the plane.the only time I see the inside is when I get in the plane. My head always sticks out of the top. So I wear goggles so my eyes don't dry up. As I come in for the landing my goggles flinged off my face “ahhh” I screamed out loud in tearer. “My goggles” i healed over and over. As I tried to keep my eyes open as long as possible. “Not now i am to young to die” I forced my eyes open so i don't crash I was determined to land this plane, don't fear. I landed the plane “that was a close call” I keeped saying to myself, still up to this day I still remember it like it was yesterday.
20.6.1985 from Roald Dahl
this is what I made for our friday task color push where you have 90s to make art. so this is what I made take a look.
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Hey DC, nice story, I'm glad he survived his solo flight! Remember to proofread your story and blog before posting, checking all of your spelling and capital letters. I don't want you to rush. Your artwork is really cool! I love the colours. It would be cool if you added in some more detail. How did you create this artwork? Did you enjoy it? Happy Friday! Caitlin :)
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you have used the senses in this writing, you have listened to feedback over the pst few weeks and you have made some great sentences. I also like the way you have tried to use punctuation for effect. Your Push Art is impressive, I really like the blended colours.
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